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    dots Submission Name: First Step to Glorydots
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    Author: Max Million
    ASL Info:    17/M/DRA
    Elite Ratio:    2.61 - 34/63/78
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
    Total Views: 33
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    Bytes: 727



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    dotsFirst Step to Glorydots
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    From the blood stained fields of wheat
    To the crimson echoes of her tundra
    The Motherland weeps
    Her sons killed by the jaws of ruthless dogs

    The gray horizon masked with the facade of night
    Only to give way to the cries of war and the false promises of revenge
    But are they false?
    No

    The sun breaches the wall of smoke and debris and I cry
    I cry for my brothers lost
    I cry for the blood stained wheat
    I cry for my comrade, lying beside me dying

    But most of all my friends
    I cry for the sight just before my eyes
    They promised us victory
    And now the flag of the mother land flies above the Reichstag




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