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    dots Submission Name: God of Timedots
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    Author: Max Million
    ASL Info:    17/M/DRA
    Elite Ratio:    2.61 - 34/63/78
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 32
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    dotsGod of Timedots
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    My brother, my crutch
    You stare at me so admiringly
    I return, but with many different emotions
    Love coupled with jealousy
    Worry coupled with envy
    Hatred coupled with tenderness

    You are my world, Dear Kronos
    The Triumvirate of Hearts, eternally in my mind
    You held, and will always hold, that very special place
    But I will always be a brother, never the one to be held in your arms
    Always on the sideline, in the back seat, a low priority
    But, after all, you are busy, oh God of Time

    Time enough for her, eh?
    She will forever be that puzzle piece, holding your heart in two
    She, the poor child, the devil child, will forever be your maiden
    And am I, the God King, to be left in the night?
    Yes, yes I am
    Sad, isn't it?

    But still, you are my love
    You're held dear to my void
    You're a force that will forever roam in my barren mind
    You are the wind in the desert of my heart
    You are my love
    Oh, God of Time




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