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    dots Submission Name: Realitydots
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    Author: SilentDreams42
    Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 38/30/42
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       I constantly find myself wishing that I had somebody on my side, holding my hand, regardless of the situation or what I've done.

    No matter how much a fight it, sometimes I just need to know that somebodys willing to be there for me in my weakest of moments.








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    dotsRealitydots
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    I shut my eyes
    Thinking that this canít possibly be reality
    How could this life belong to me?

    I shut my eyes
    Because when they are open
    Nothing is as it should be

    Unaided and unsuccessfully
    I try to break free
    As these mountains come crumbling down on me
    Boulders knocking me ruthlessly

    I swim as far as can be
    But blood fills the oceanís soul
    And yet you still frolic in it
    As the ocean swallows me whole

    I try to fly
    And soar among the birds in the sky
    But unnoticed I fall
    For I am but one after all

    My tears turn red
    Telling me theyíve had enough
    Yet they keep flowing
    Because itís hard to fight by yourself
    Especially when the going gets tough

    So I shut my eyes
    And halt the cries
    Hoping to sleep
    Because in this world
    I know Iím alone

    I shut my eyes
    And I want to sleep forever




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    ||| Comments |||
      We ALL feel like we are alone and have no one. As humans we need to lean on someone.

    You are never alone

    He is ALWAYS there.

    Just keep remembering that and everything will seem to fall in place.

    Fana

    By the way great write!
    | Posted on 2009-10-07 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      i feel u man. this hits the spot.


    | Posted on 2009-10-02 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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