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    dots Submission Name: Miles Traveled and Still I Searchdots
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    Author: Namlooc20
    ASL Info:    26/Male/Spokane, WA
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 359/327/107
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 584
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    Bytes: 508



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       Because its cheesy, and I thought it was nifty. Thoughts Thanks.


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    dotsMiles Traveled and Still I Searchdots
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    I've traveled around the world,
    by foot and by sea,
    just to ask you if you can see.
    I don't need armor
    or my trusty steed.
    Because its the heart
    and my courage that need to be.
    So smile if you know it,
    and cry if you don't
    because I'm prince charming
    and leave you I won't.
    So if you know who you are,
    and you trust that this is true.
    Let me know,
    I'm looking for my princess too.




    Submitted on 2009-09-19 21:28:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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