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    Author: dimampsombre
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    dotssome useless, pointless nonsense..dots
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    remaining absent sometimes is nothing more than a necessary occupational affliction.

    but it puts me in the dock for the sins i never dare to commit... i am innocent not because of some intangible principles but for the simple reason: i am scared of such unwanted advances. i've no illusions and i wonder why people stoop so low and violate and cheapen their own bodies.

    coming to the first thing, i have to travel often... i live almost a wanderer's life. sometimes, i think why not end it all, end this life itself that offers no stability.

    for me this is not cowardice, to say it plainly: it makes sense.

    but i'll not do it anyway because it is going to hurt those who love me.

    atleast, in one way, love can defeat death.




    Submitted on 2009-09-20 08:00:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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