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She’s an angel… who’s forgotten she has wings but I can’t help her remember down to earth, like the snow in the winter, December and there’s nothing I can say in cold gasps of air as my lungs thick with it’s pressure now collapse and bear my soul, exposé more as if it was written for if she is the frost then I have been bitten and with it, the story the coldest ever told of the lost snow angel and the frostbitten soul… llike so many times before I remind her who she is to me, truly if only she could find her wings… they’re right there attached to her back I just pray she doesn’t fall and not find them after the fact or that it never gets that far or gets that hard I just want it as in my memory if that’s par and in the shard is the story the coldest ever told of the lost snow angel and the frostbitten soul…. |
NICE i like this one especially the way it's being told VERY gripping :) I like the last few stanza's the most I just want it as in my memory if that’s par and in the shard is the story the coldest ever told of the lost snow angel and the frostbitten soul…. VERY creative nice job keep it up :) peace & stay safe... | Posted on 2010-01-27 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ] | This was a marvles peice, I like the title it’s very fitting and the analogy of a lost angel who’s lost her wing not knowing there still on her back. I know how it is when someone is in slumber lost searching for what they already have and you could help them or show them if only they listen. I also injoy the comparesin of winter, it seems when the heart is cold winter always feels like home. Again this was a splendid piece keep up the work. | Faid | Posted on 2009-09-23 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ] | |