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    dots Submission Name: True Love Killsdots
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    Author: RaveAngel
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 528
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       about a girlwho has been bullied, and now she cant tke it anymore she doesnt believe she has anything else to live for. But maybe she does


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    dotsTrue Love Killsdots
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    "Be safe"
    As she came into class
    Time went by fast
    As she sat there
    They started 2 stare
    The teacher said goodbye 2 her row
    she didnít want 2 go
    she kept walking
    But the boys behind where stalking
    she waited her fate
    But by then it was 2 late
    They charged from behind
    Without out a single sign
    As she hit the ground
    They turned around
    With a smirk on their face
    she had 2 get out of that place
    As she ran off 2 cry
    1 one boy stayed and said hi
    His name was Jake
    And he wasnít fake
    They talked 4 a while
    She loved it when heíd smile
    But when they were in class
    The good side didnít last
    When school came 2 an end
    He wasnít her friend
    He called her fat
    And a stupid twat
    He hung with the crowd
    And did what he was allowed
    As she went 2 leave
    She felt a big heave
    They pulled her back down
    Her head smacked the ground
    They beat her until she was black and blue
    Jake didnít want to join but they force him 2
    When she cried out in pain
    They didnít hit her again
    They seen what they done
    But this time it wasnít fun
    They ran away
    Not wanting 2 stay
    When she was alone
    It felt as if she had broken a bone
    She went 2 her house
    And walked in silent as a mouse
    Her mum was at the shop
    And her dad was out being a cop
    She went 2 the drawer
    And sat on the floor
    She wrote him a note
    With only 1 quote
    I love u
    I wished u loved me 2
    As she looked at the knife
    The thing that would take her life
    She cut face
    And cried which stung in every place
    As she place it over her heart
    She struck and that was the her final part

    Jake heart was filled with sin
    He decided 2 go see Evelyn
    He waited at the door
    Then heard a thud on the floor
    He walked into the hall
    Without a single stall
    He checked in the kitchen living room 2
    Then he went up stairs 2 what he could do
    When he found her there
    His heart filled with despair
    He read what she said
    His eyes filled with dread
    As he collapsed on the ground
    He didnít make a sound
    He thought off all the lies
    Then he looked into her eyes
    And said
    ďNow u are dead,
    What can i do
    Because Evelyn i loved u too!!Ē

    By Nadine Thomas




    Submitted on 2009-09-21 15:17:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Its crap i know hehe
    | Posted on 2009-09-21 00:00:00 | by RaveAngel | [ Reply to This ]


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