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    dots Submission Name: Overcomedots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Spoof/Serious
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    dotsOvercomedots
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    I took what you have done to me,
    I have taken all those nasty memories,
    and even those feelings

    I've been putting them towards good use!
    Something you never expected from me!

    I am living with the pain you have caused me,
    I have accepted the pain,
    yet I am not allowing it to control me,
    I am not letting myself to become consumed by those feelings!

    Yes, I love you
    Granted you have my Mother,
    you gave me life,
    to be who I am today!

    Nevertheless you are also my enemy,
    I need to be caution
    For I know you are always up to no good.

    Again this is why I am who I am,
    I am living with those mistakes you made,
    I am taking each day as it shall come,
    as I do each and every obstacle,

    I simply hope you are able to do the same,
    without passing judgment that is!




    Submitted on 2009-09-21 23:47:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You still haven't talked to your mom have you? I hope for you for your heart that soon before it's too late for her and your brother in your heart they realize what they are loosing and reach out to you!!! You are still my favorite to read here hands down.
    You are doing what it takes to survive and to live and that is never more evident than here. Keep writing it helps ..... You told me this...

    always
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    | Posted on 2009-09-22 00:00:00 | by trynfinity | [ Reply to This ]


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