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    dots Submission Name: Stand Staid Againstdots
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    Author: realpoet
    Elite Ratio:    6.51 - 904/475/311
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       It remains to be seen if all these townhall meetings are a front to quieten public opinion on the issue of univeral health care which congress has already decided upon.


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    dotsStand Staid Againstdots
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    O,sally forth ye citizens,all,
    the mare of illness enters the stall
    to lay a burden wherewithal
    on our shoulders numb with taxes' gall
    in suppport of health to all who call
    upon gracious congress dancing at ball
    like sots knowing not when mignight falls..

    Know ye not the charter of our land
    gives power to the people as where they stand
    on issues small and issues grand
    and congress dare not move our hand
    nor force their issues 'gainst our demand
    saying its their choice as elected imans.
    Stand your ground, O peoples, stand .
    This is America, freedom's land.

    There is nil that's settled,
    nil that's staid in acting not brave,
    except the human spirit
    staid against the thief
    rankling at the door of freedom.




    Submitted on 2009-09-22 13:41:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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