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Stand Staid Against

Author: realpoet
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It remains to be seen if all these townhall meetings are a front to quieten public opinion on the issue of univeral health care which congress has already decided upon.

Stand Staid Against

O,sally forth ye citizens,all,
the mare of illness enters the stall
to lay a burden wherewithal
on our shoulders numb with taxes' gall
in suppport of health to all who call
upon gracious congress dancing at ball
like sots knowing not when mignight falls..

Know ye not the charter of our land
gives power to the people as where they stand
on issues small and issues grand
and congress dare not move our hand
nor force their issues 'gainst our demand
saying its their choice as elected imans.
Stand your ground, O peoples, stand .
This is America, freedom's land.

There is nil that's settled,
nil that's staid in acting not brave,
except the human spirit
staid against the thief
rankling at the door of freedom.

Submitted on 2009-09-22 13:41:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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