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Little Angel

Author: DaRaven
ASL Info:    25 Male Ontario
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Little Angel

So this path, has shed some light,
I turned this way and made a new life.

I now see how i was once before,
And when looked back, I was at the core.
The core was leading me into the end.
Too young, before my life even began...

But now im here, and here I am!
Reborn am I?
I sat with tears and then realized,
I really did learn how to fly.

And O'how my wings have started to fill,
feet back on the ground and having the will.
Straight and legit thats the way I go,
Wont go back to the old style flow

My angel has given me courage to change my ways,
And now i wake up with brighter days.

One day when she grows i will speak of these times, good and bad,
And let her know i came with her, for her and never turned back

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