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Flicker Flicker

Author: Rhythmal
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Words: 57
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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A taste with more to come, this one is meant to be longer, but this is all I could manage to get through my writers block for now.

Flicker Flicker

Flicker Flicker candlelight
Flicker Flicker oh so bright
In the darkness of the night
In the shadow of all thats right.
Flicker Flicker in the night
by the light of the blood moon bright
Murderous souls and hearts made of coal
many men tonight
gather by the light
of the blood moon bright.

Submitted on 2009-09-22 21:52:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It reminds me of a spell from the green witch book of shadows... actually, your pieces would make a great grimoire collection. Have you ever thought of compiling one?
| Posted on 2009-10-07 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
  This seems promising, I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of it. I love suspence!
| Posted on 2009-09-28 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]

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