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    dots Submission Name: My Perfect Girl (song about my guitar)dots
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    Author: Mimicked
    ASL Info:    28, Male, Portland
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 10/0/15
    Words: 399
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Romance
    Total Views: 510
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2960



    Description:
       This is a song I wrote about my guitar. The chorus is the strings.


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    dotsMy Perfect Girl (song about my guitar)dots
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    She’s a gorgeous little girl
    Nice slender fret board
    Bold Beautiful body
    Her Skirt a pick-guard

    She don’t know her weight
    But she dances on the scale
    Moving through Octaves
    Like finger tips on Braille

    Jumping her Frets
    Like a runner over hurdles
    Plucking her wires
    Screaming, "Sing for me Girl!"

    And oh when she sings
    It’s a magnificent sound
    Belting out her number
    With a strap for a Gown

    Just Six Strings and Me
    Out on a date
    Singing and Dancing
    Acoustic Music our fate

    Out by the fire
    Swaying and Singing
    Holding her tight
    Harmonizing the evening


    I call her:
    Evelyn (E)
    Anna (A)
    Dianna (D)
    Guenovere (G)
    (two count pause)
    Beverly (B)
    extraordinaire (E)
    -repeat

    I don’t have to buy her presents
    Dinner or Gifts
    She never makes demands
    Or “Honey-Do” lists

    She never complains
    Bickers or moans
    Defines the term Sexy
    Cuz she never wears clothes

    I think I might be in love
    She’s my favorite girl
    Intimately mine
    But known all over the world

    She can sing country
    Or Belt out the Blues
    Rock-out with the Best
    She’s Melodically infused

    (chorus)

    I tickle her neck
    While strumming her strings
    And she jumps with excitement
    And lets out a scream

    She speaks all dialects
    Knows every lexicon
    Sings in every accent
    When she’s playing her song

    Rockin’ Chords tough
    Or picked soft with grace
    Like stunning cheek bones
    Inlays on her face

    Yeah I'm Pretty sure I could
    Spend the rest of my days
    With just her and me
    My Guitar my Soul Mate

    (chorus)

    (Out for) a Double Date
    With her Friend Violin
    And my buddy Cello,
    We sound Amazin'

    Carrying a tune
    Courting these ladies
    More instruments joining in
    This Date’s getting crazy

    It’s a full blown party
    Everyone’s dancing
    The drums and The Bass
    Have a Jazz beat bouncin’

    In walks Sax
    With his whole Brass Crew
    Horns start blaring
    And the piano too

    The percussion gang
    has been setting the beat
    Doing it right,
    Moving people’s feet

    Cymbals chime in
    and Bells start ringing
    I hear Clarinet hittin' notes
    and Harmonica Singing

    Our band’s infinitely pieced
    And man we sound great
    This is why I love it
    when we go on group dates

    (chorus)




    Submitted on 2009-09-24 16:50:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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