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    dots Submission Name: Self Realizationdots
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    Author: Mimicked
    ASL Info:    28, Male, Portland
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 10/0/15
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsSelf Realizationdots
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    Your Time your own
    Dont let me take you away
    From any of the plans that you've made today

    But when you have a chance
    There's something I'd like to share
    It's allowed me to give up my worries and forget about my cares.

    I'm not claiming I'm enlightened
    I'm just finally Me.
    You see, I see life so simply
    Live and Let be

    I'm far from perfect
    Flawed in too many way
    But "Yoga makes you who you are"
    Bikram always says

    And I'm only one me
    But I know how I care
    About life beyond me
    Real life worldly affairs

    See, the compassion in me
    Has grown like a seed
    Flourishing Freely
    Almost like a weed
    But never a nuisance
    I am my own heart
    I can say "I've been there before -
    I am not w/o scars"

    I've worked to grow
    and challenge my depth
    Making time for myself
    To develop and self reflect

    Evolution of myself
    Through thorough contemplation
    The result is before you in my Self Realization.




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