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    dots Submission Name: The Pen Is Mightier Than The Sworddots
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    Author: Mimicked
    ASL Info:    28, Male, Portland
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 10/0/15
    Words: 253
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Angry
    Total Views: 539
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1669



    Description:
       I was nearly killed by a 6'6" deaf man in Pacific Beach (San Diego) in 2005. The Doctors profusely told me I was a "miracle" as the wound came within millimeters of both my jugular vein and corroded artery. Here's the pics.


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    dotsThe Pen Is Mightier Than The Sworddots
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    Now this Big Old Boy
    Was Deaf and Dumb
    Tall and Dark
    w/ no use for his tongue

    But with his blade
    His song was sung
    And I wear the scars
    That cant be undone
    See on my body
    these scars are hung
    Stabbed in the back
    Stabbed in the lung

    Chorus-
    You took a whole outta Me!!!!!!!!
    But I aint going out that easily!!!
    (no, no, no....no)


    "Off with his head"
    He must have thought
    When he jumped and sliced
    And thoroughly chopped
    And over What?
    A couple of girls?
    Gonna use that knife to take me outta this world?

    Jugular vein - barely spared
    And you claim to be innocent, you don't even care
    But I nearly died - Care you should
    Fucking Rot in Hell Andre Hood

    (chorus)

    And Mr. Green, your little buddy
    He can go too
    At least I knocked him funny

    And I dont get you, but you are a bad man
    Writing a story, with a knife in your hand
    My flesh your paper
    My skin your notebook
    And w/ that cursive you scribbled
    My life you almost took

    And they say "dont judge a book, by it's cover"
    But I've read enough of you, to pity you brother

    (chorus)

    You claim you're the victim
    Handicap Signing your buffer
    In my opinion it should be
    One eye for another.

    You are a bad human
    You define "No Good"
    Fucking Rot in Hell Andre Hood




    Submitted on 2009-09-24 16:59:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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