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    dots Submission Name: My Ode to Michael Jacksondots
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    Author: Mimicked
    ASL Info:    28, Male, Portland
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 10/0/15
    Words: 371
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMy Ode to Michael Jacksondots
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    Michael Joseph Jackson
    Your name to be echoed Forever
    Dance moves Defying Gravity
    Feet made of Feathers

    Top of your Toes
    Yelling a Squeal
    Hat Tossed post spin
    Site so Surreal

    Flawed all the same
    Lord knows he had demons
    Childhood amiss
    For this young singing phenom

    Ya know I’ve sung all your songs
    I've Moved to your groove
    Done the Robot & Moonwalk
    Mimicked every dance move

    The King of Pop
    The Entertainer so Divine
    You Changed Music Overnight
    Like Jesus w/ Water & Wine

    At “Motown 25”
    In Nineteen Eighty Three
    You Shocked the whole World
    Changed the Entertainment Industry

    “Yesterday, Today, Forever”
    Displayed Dance moves never seen
    Debuting the Moonwalk
    While performing Billy Jean

    Inducted two times
    Rock n’ Roll Hall of Fame
    13 number one hits
    A career of acclaim

    The Jackson 5
    w/ Marlon, Tito, Jack & Jermaine
    And You the Star
    Center of the Stage

    No time for a childhood
    You’re a victim too
    Abused by Joe
    But your actions I won’t excuse

    (off to)

    Never Never Land
    Starring Peter Pan
    His life you lived
    With one glove on your hand

    Taking off from Gary
    With Adolescent Demands
    Waiving that sparkling glove
    To adoring fans

    Never growing up
    Your Life a Fantasy
    Face Plastique
    Via Rhinoplasty

    Skin Bleached White
    PR Blunders
    Thoughts behind your actions
    We would wonder

    But an MTV mainstay
    “Bad” & “Smooth Criminal”
    “Dirty Diana” & “Thriller”
    All unbelievable

    “Off the Wall”
    Simply Fantastic
    Dead at age 50
    New so Tragic

    You're Far From Perfect
    I have to say
    But I won’t overlook
    the Philanthropy in your name

    You’ve supported many causes
    Made umpteen donations
    All profits from the Dangerous tour
    Went to the “Heal the world Foundation”

    Neurotic No Doubt
    Obscurely Eccentric
    Dressed up in Costumes
    And in Jewelry so expensive

    Faux Cast
    - Wind Machines
    Excessive awesome
    - Every theme

    Egyptian to Gangster
    Leather to Love
    Zombie to a Mirror
    Signature Sequined Glove

    Though it’s all over now
    The show’s finally come to a Stop
    But to the World you will always be
    "The King of Pop"




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