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    dots Submission Name: It's not about the Moneydots
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    Author: Mimicked
    ASL Info:    28, Male, Portland
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 10/0/15
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 477
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    dotsIt's not about the Moneydots
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    We come to this earth
    Full of worth without a cent
    And we leave without a penny
    See Greed makes no sense

    We clutter ourselves wiht our collections
    While never analyzing our self reflections

    These monetary possessions
    Only get in our way
    They're not necessary to live out our days

    If it's happiness, you truly seek
    Then selflessness should be your technique

    There's a joy in helping
    There's a joy in Change
    Find your joy for humanity
    For the entire Human Race

    Find your center
    Find the Truth
    Find yourself and live life loose

    Universal Currency
    our Time is too precious
    Living in the moment is a priceless lesson




    Submitted on 2009-09-24 18:34:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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