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    Author: Mimicked
    ASL Info:    28, Male, Portland
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 10/0/15
    Words: 270
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 476
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1937



    Description:
       I wrote this for my little sister's college graduation last June.


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    A Proast to the alumnus
    Diploma now in hand
    Off to study abroad
    Her ambitions so Grand

    I canít find all the words
    To express my delight
    You can stare down any problem
    Triumph in any strife

    Never cower
    Never Waiver
    And try not to fret
    Your journey's now begun
    Your life a treasure chest
    And you the crown jewel
    Outshining the sun
    Like a priceless Ruby
    Your parts exceed your sum

    A good-time Gal
    The life of any occasion
    Collectively transcendent
    Always the liaison

    I love you Meg
    I canít express that enough
    You can call on me for anything
    At worst I'll wish you luck
    In any of your endeavors
    Adventures or passions
    You can light up any moment
    Like a magician performing Magic

    Cap tossed
    Gown worn
    A chapter closed
    Another open

    Be Bold
    But Stay Humble
    And always keep your mind open

    College over
    For now
    But always stay a student
    Studying life's lessons
    Be patient and prudent

    I canít wait to see
    Your immaculate smirk
    And congratulate you
    On all your hard work

    No longer my little sister
    But a gorgeous grown woman
    At the doorstep of your life
    And your own personal movement

    Iíve come with no gifts
    No grandiose presents
    Just my humble notes
    That I hope capture the essence
    Of my current admiration
    For my favorite little sister
    Please raise your glass in celebration
    And give Megan your best wishes

    Please accept these words
    In lieu of monetary possessions
    And know Iíll never hesitate to say
    ďI love you Megan!Ē




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