I Walk Alone by Egan

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Submission Name: I Walk Alone dots

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Author:	Egan
ASL Info:	23/Male/My girl's bed
Elite Ratio:	3.97 - 5/9/4
Words:	141

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	70
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	883

Description:
Somewhat inspired by Boulevard of Broken Dreams by Green Day.

I Walk Alone dots

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I walk alone
On this lonely path I've taken
It will no doubt lead me somewhere
That is if I am not mistaken

Mistakes can happen
Folks can get lost
Yet I will take this path
No matter what the cost

I would have hoped you'd come along
But I understand long gone
You may no longer be my queen
But I am also not your pawn

I meet no travelers on this road
They are all smarter than I
The icy wind wipes 'round my face
There is no room left to cry

I wish I knew what happened
That I knew what went wrong
But there's no doubt about it
You're already long long gone

Someday this road will end
My heart as cold as stone
But maybe then
I'll no longer walk alone.

Submitted on 2009-09-27 10:42:07 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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young WEE(zy) egan in tha hizzy, for shizzle my dizzle caramel drizzle with the chocolate chip sizzle. this is sick (you find ryhmes like eliot) ness.
| Posted on 2009-10-04 00:00:00 | by ghad | [ Reply to This ]
well done! this is a very fine peice of art. I really like the whole poem and it is going to be one of my favourites.

I like this part most :

" I would have hoped you'd come along
But I understand long gone
You may no longer be my queen
But I am also not your pawn "

Good Job.

| Posted on 2009-09-27 00:00:00 | by Khaled AbdAllah | [ Reply to This ]

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