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    dots Submission Name: I believedots
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    Author: freeangel
    ASL Info:    22/female/bournemouth
    Elite Ratio:    3.59 - 87/117/109
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 48
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    dotsI believedots
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    Your eyes sweep up the light flecks,
    and reflect the sun…
    I breathe you in…
    dreamland is a marvellous place.
    connected but not connected.
    They say you’re different.
    Your own soul.
    But how can that be?
    I piece you together,
    atom by atom, particle by
    sweet particle, I breathe you,
    dream you, shout your name to
    the stars where I believe you
    can hear me, and will respond in some
    time-doesn’t-matter way.
    Below but above
    Not breathing, but existing
    Who says when?
    Who says anything at all?
    Your eyes, hair, lips…all mine.
    Mine.
    An angel to me.
    Until I need you.




    Submitted on 2009-09-27 15:14:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is pretty.

    the first line is my favorite.

    "i breathe you.."

    the last line too.

    well worded, all of it. just an interesting little piece.

    with peace and love. kt
    | Posted on 2009-09-28 00:00:00 | by Theophilus | [ Reply to This ]



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