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    dots Submission Name: message from heavendots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 800
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    dotsmessage from heavendots
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    everytime i close my eyes
    everytime i say goodbye
    your face is all i see.
    you made me promise
    not to follow
    not to fall
    its hard when your not here
    i hope you know that.
    i wish their was a way
    you could send a sign
    just letting me know your okay.
    the day you left
    i'll never forget
    its ingraved upon my mind
    you smiled and cried
    and it was like my heart was breaking
    for i knew the end was near.
    send a sign
    send something
    im craving any bit of knowledge
    but its ok cause i you tried
    its just hard sending messages
    from heaven i guess.




    Submitted on 2009-09-27 23:47:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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