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    dots Submission Name: armaggedon ahoydots
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    Author: aftertheflesh
    Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 76/113/48
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Gothic
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    dotsarmaggedon ahoydots
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    bloody axe in my hands
    you fulfilling my demands
    as the ships burn in the fields
    all the lies your truth yields
    bodies in ashes
    watch my descent
    into hell and my ruin
    heaven falls to her knees
    tempting satan with her pleas
    some know better than to run away
    then the others do not
    kill the pilgrims and fuck the day
    save the best for last
    so brink of war we fight and die
    while our souls burn in the sky




    Submitted on 2004-07-20 13:17:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      rhythm and rhyme perfect
    pure emotion good
    nice write kinda reminds me of two squirrels dancing
    sorry
    it just
    does
    ggooed rite
    | Posted on 2004-07-22 00:00:00 | by stickman | [ Reply to This ]



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