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    dots Submission Name: At The Doordots

    Author: XZylaFaith
    ASL Info:    19/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/20
    Words: 227
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsAt The Doordots

    I never felt so complete before
    It's like I just opened some door
    Found myself in a whole new world
    I feel as though I may fall to the floor

    I asked for another chance
    I got what I was looking for
    The first time I looked at you
    I knew that this will be like a dance

    Love is like learning a dance
    Take one step at a time
    You may get hurt once or twice
    Or many times

    It may take a long time to recover
    From all the hurts and pains
    Though in the end I've gained some strength
    I've learned to love once more

    I've gone on a journey
    One that seems so easy to get lost in
    I found myself again
    I found what I was missing

    I never knew what was waiting for me
    At The Door
    When I opened it
    It was you
    And I'm so glad it was too

    Wednesday, Feb. 11th, 2009

    Submitted on 2009-09-28 13:26:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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