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    dots Submission Name: Believe In Medots
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    Author: XZylaFaith
    ASL Info:    19/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/20
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsBelieve In Medots
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    I'm here
    Look at me
    I'm right in front of you
    I know you will never see me

    Because you don't believe
    You don't believe in me
    Who else would?
    It's no use

    Why can't you believe?
    For once in your life
    Just believe
    Your life would become freer

    If only you would believe in me
    It hurts to know that
    There are people out there who
    Just don't believe

    But if only you would believe in me
    Then maybe you would see
    What I'm trying to tell you
    I'm not pretend

    I am real
    If only you would
    Believe In Me

    ~Brie~
    Saturday, July 5, 2009




    Submitted on 2009-09-28 13:28:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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