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    Author: XZylaFaith
    ASL Info:    19/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/20
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsConfuseddots
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    Dreams of what may be
    Love isn't really what it seems
    Could go so far, you'll be lost forever in bed
    Just can't get it through my head
    If I should lead or be led
    Am I to be confused?
    To whom I really am
    Should I try harder?
    Or just let it go
    Without knowing what may happen?

    Just to think
    To really think
    That I'm really this way
    Or might I just be a little bit confused instead
    I have no idea
    Just got to figure this one out in bed!

    ~Brie~
    Friday, January 16, 2009




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