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    dots Submission Name: Craving Medots
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    Author: XZylaFaith
    ASL Info:    19/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/20
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsCraving Medots
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    Pull me close
    To your delicious body
    Entice me with
    Every whisper in my ear

    Softly lie me down
    Slowly, gliding your fingers
    All over my hot body
    Collapse in to me

    Gently tease me with
    Every breath you take
    Moving your hands on my hips
    Teasing me with your lips

    Kiss me softly
    Everywhere you can imagine
    Use your wonderful fascination
    To get what you want from me

    Burning, I feel the heat
    From you desire
    Knowing that
    You are so
    Craving Me

    ~Brie~
    Monday, July 20, 2009




    Submitted on 2009-09-28 13:32:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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