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    dots Submission Name: Craving Youdots
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    Author: XZylaFaith
    ASL Info:    19/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/20
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsCraving Youdots
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    Here alone
    Just thinking about you so much
    Missing you more than ever before
    I just can't stand being apart from you so long
    I'm going insane
    Out of control
    Like never before
    And I'm Craving You
    So much more
    I'm Craving Your Touch
    I'm Craving
    The taste of your kiss
    I'm Craving You
    I need you
    To stop this craving
    I seriously can't stop this
    Craving I have
    You're the only one that can
    Because it's you I crave
    I crave the feeling of you holding me tight
    Like you will never let me go
    It's no use to only pretend
    It's not the same
    I just need what I'm craving
    And what I'm craving is
    You...
    My Love...
    I Love You

    ~Brie~
    Saturday, January 3, 2009






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