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    dots Submission Name: Foreverdots
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    Author: XZylaFaith
    ASL Info:    19/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/20
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsForeverdots
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    Vincent shadows
    Red as like scarlet
    All around me
    I hear voices
    Their whispers sound so delicious
    I can't stop to think
    What I would do without you
    You complete me
    More than you'll ever know

    I need you
    I want to touch you
    The feel of you skin
    The chill that I get
    When I'm next to you
    The most luscious scent
    I get from you

    No one can compete
    Cause they'll never win
    I love you so much
    Just knowing that I'm with you is
    The best feeling ever
    It wouldn't be the same without you
    I want to be with you
    Forever!

    ~Brie~
    Friday, January 16, 2009




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