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    dots Submission Name: Holding On To Youdots
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    Author: XZylaFaith
    ASL Info:    19/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/20
    Words: 211
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsHolding On To Youdots
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    So I keep
    Holding on
    To You
    Hoping that
    Just maybe
    You will
    Change your mind
    About being
    With me

    I keep holding
    On to you
    Hoping that
    Just maybe
    You will
    See what you are
    Truly missing out on
    The one person
    You said that
    You would never forget

    Did you forget?
    Forget that you did
    Tell me that
    That you said
    That we've been
    Through hell together
    Did you forget?
    Have you thought
    For one second to

    Tell me
    That you
    Haven't forgot me
    That you still would
    Like to take another
    Chance on me

    I continue to
    Keep holding on
    To you
    Because you
    Really matter
    To me
    You always have
    And always will
    I just can't
    Let you go yet

    I still love you
    With all my heart and desire
    There's no way I can't
    Let you go
    At least not yet

    So I'll just continue
    Holding On To You
    Hoping that one day
    We'll have a
    Second chance
    For us to be together

    ~Brie~
    Wednesday, May 20th, 2009






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