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    dots Submission Name: I Love You, Moredots
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    Author: XZylaFaith
    ASL Info:    19/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/20
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 521
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 879



    Description:
       I wrote this one because my girl and I have been having an never ending battle about who loves each other more!!! ~Brie~


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    dotsI Love You, Moredots
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    I Love You, More

    Take my hand
    Let me show you
    Who I really am
    What I'm all about

    I am
    Who I really am
    Love is
    What I'm all about

    I want you
    To be
    My girlfriend
    Or my wife instead

    You don't know
    How much
    I Love You More
    I cherish the love

    The love I have for you
    I Love You More
    Than any words can say
    Than anything that
    Money can buy

    Nothing in this world
    Can never change my mind
    I will always and forever
    Love you more

    I Love You More
    My Love, My Girlfriend

    ~Brie~
    Saturday, May 30th, 2009








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