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    dots Submission Name: I Truly Still Love Youdots
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    Author: XZylaFaith
    ASL Info:    19/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/20
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsI Truly Still Love Youdots
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    If only you knew
    That I still love you
    It hurts me more
    That I can't truly tell you this
    Because you're so faraway
    From me, so faraway

    If only you knew
    That I'm missing you
    And that I regret not kissing you
    It hurts me that I can't see you
    Or even to be with you
    I've always wanted you
    And I want you, even more

    It's not the same
    Even being with someone else
    I'm always missing you
    I even think of you more
    I just hope you know
    That I truly still love you

    I hope you just know
    That I still would like to be with you
    If I ever got the chance to
    I would, no matter what
    I'll always still love you
    With all my heart and desire

    ~Brie~
    Friday, April 3, 2009




    Submitted on 2009-09-28 13:43:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is incredablr. I feel the emotion put into this and the wording is beautiful.
    | Posted on 2009-10-08 00:00:00 | by Mythica | [ Reply to This ]


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