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    dots Submission Name: Imaginingdots
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    Author: XZylaFaith
    ASL Info:    19/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/20
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsImaginingdots
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    I lay here
    Wondering
    What you're doing
    Thinking about you

    As I close me eyes
    I'm imagining
    That you're here next to me
    Touching every inch of my body
    Chills run up my spine
    As I imagine
    That you're on me

    And now my breathing has increased
    My heart beating so fast
    I can't control it
    I need the pleasure
    It's what I treasure

    And when I open my eyes
    It just disappears
    And all I'm left with are tears

    I just lay here alone
    Thinking about how much
    I truly miss you!


    ~Brie~
    Monday, January 19, 2009




    Submitted on 2009-09-28 13:47:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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