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    dots Submission Name: In The Darkdots
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    Author: XZylaFaith
    ASL Info:    19/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/20
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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    dotsIn The Darkdots
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    In the dark
    All alone
    No where to hide
    No where to go
    I'm just here in the dark
    All alone
    Wondering if I'll ever go home

    It's not my fault
    I should've known
    But what can I do now
    I don't know

    There's no one here
    Just me, myself & I
    Sitting on this rock
    In the dark
    All alone

    I don't want to go
    But I know I have to
    So I'll start walking home
    I just hope I won't fall in a hole

    ~Brie~
    Monday, January 19, 2009




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