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    dots Submission Name: Little Bit Too Latedots
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    Author: XZylaFaith
    ASL Info:    19/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/20
    Words: 307
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
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    dotsLittle Bit Too Latedots
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    Memories of everything we had
    Come back to me when I'm in despair
    When I sit and listen to the c.d. you gave me
    I never really knew how much I've missed you
    But now I see that
    I miss you so much
    I wish you could be with me
    But you can't
    'Cause you missed your chance
    And I don't think you'll ever get it back

    I'm losing my mind
    Trying to think
    Wondering if
    You'll ever be with me
    If you're even meant for me

    I never really knew how much I still love you
    After all the years we've been apart
    I would give anything for you to be with me
    But I'm sorry to say
    You'll a little bit too late
    And I don't think you'll ever get another chance with me

    But one wish would be to
    Kiss those lips of yours
    Cause' its something I've always wanted to do
    I just lost the time and now it's never gonna happen with me and you

    It's too late for us to be together
    I'm saying this because it's true
    I'm never gonna love you more than ever
    I'm in love with another and possibly forever!!

    ~Brie~
    Sunday, January 11th, 2009




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