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    dots Submission Name: Loves Me For Medots
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    Author: XZylaFaith
    ASL Info:    19/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/20
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLoves Me For Medots
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    I lost my mind
    Can't help but to cry
    I know why
    I feel this way

    Because all my life
    I never felt I was good enough
    I never thought I could be loved enough
    Until I met you

    You made me feel as though
    I could have some hope
    That maybe I won't have to feel this way
    And you showed me that it is possible

    Cause I don't think I was before
    I thought that no one would ever like
    Me for who I really am
    I've been used before and I felt

    Like I were to ever open up again
    That I might be used once more
    It took sometime to see that you
    Would never be a person to use me

    How hard it was for me to really see
    That you wouldn't use me
    Honestly, I'm so glad that
    I'm with someone who
    Loves Me For Me

    ~Brie~
    Friday, March 6, 2009







    Submitted on 2009-09-28 13:53:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That is a very good poem. Very touching.
    | Posted on 2009-10-02 00:00:00 | by basketballchick | [ Reply to This ]


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