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    dots Submission Name: The Might of the Mightydots
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    Author: JoelIsHere
    ASL Info:    21/ Male/ Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 8/27/28
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsThe Might of the Mightydots
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    The Might of the Mighty,
    No purpose can it serve,
    Lest the Servants of the Mighty
    Stand ready to steady their Lord's Lance.

    Gold loses its illustrious luster,
    Whilst we drift in the shadow of yesterday.

    The greedy Lord rejoices in his unjust spoils- While his Loyal servants starve.

    The Might of the Mighty,
    Is not what we need.

    A starlit stalwart savior, rather,
    To save us from ourselves.




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