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    dots Submission Name: Secret Mind Gardendots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       Written when I was institutionalized (Dead Kennedys?!)

    for about a week in the psych ward. The erratic throws of the creator's mind and emotion!!! In an effort to see the benefit of rest and relaxation of worldly mind!!!

    Love, Peace, Joy, Grace, Faith


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    dotsSecret Mind Gardendots
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    Steal away to thy
    Secret Garden
    when Loving heart begins
    to harden.
    Lose thyself in greenery shrub of
    maze,
    Breathe in blooming color and
    graze.
    Enchanting is beauty
    from the inside
    out...
    We are all God's
    flowers, I have no
    doubt!




    Submitted on 2004-07-20 13:50:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is very beautiful. I have a secret garden too, that I retreat to when I feel the grayness taking over. And I always meet Jesus there, and walk hand in hand with him. This is just like my place. I can almost hear the sounds. ;)

    ~ Niphredil
    | Posted on 2004-11-07 00:00:00 | by Niphredil | [ Reply to This ]
      This made me think of Psalms! I love it! It's just so . . . wow. Sorry this comment stinks you just took all my words away. You see I'm Crazy in Love with God and every time I talk about him I get butterflies and I can't quite word how I feel and this peice definately makes me think of God!
    | Posted on 2004-08-16 00:00:00 | by Raineyes | [ Reply to This ]
      huh now maybe we all need to spend a few nights with the crazy people if this is what comes out. yeah I know become one of Gods children and the world say's hey you're crazy.I just tell them well not as crazy as you are cuz God crated us equal. and that doesn't me Adam looks like eve in a beard. lol
    | Posted on 2004-07-20 00:00:00 | by hotrodruss | [ Reply to This ]
      very interesting. i wish my mind could be this pretty inside sometimes! came from being in a psych ward, eh? i'd like to go there if this is what it produces! lol!

    Breathe in blooming color and/graze.

    i like that, a lot. and the last line is great! what a beautiful garden for God we could all make, eh?
    | Posted on 2004-07-20 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


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