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    dots Submission Name: Work....how typicaldots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Rant/Passion
    Total Views: 337
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    Bytes: 818



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    dotsWork....how typicaldots
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    Go to work!
    Take this shit we throw at you,
    because we're the ignorant ones,
    we're the ones who don't know you but think we do!!

    Begin another 8hr shift after finishing one at your another job,
    chug that energy drink like you've never done before,
    paint that clown face on...
    Don't you dare forget that smile!!

    Because you know that's what you and I hide behind!
    behind the tears of a clown,
    I am,
    Forever I will be,
    For no one knows my pain,
    and those fears that take over me...

    Yet I GO TO WORK!
    Take this shit we throw at you,
    because we're the ignorant ones,
    we're the ones who don't know you but think we do!!





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