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    dots Submission Name: A new song, a new lifedots
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    Author: Lareth
    ASL Info:    23/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    5 - 103/139/48
    Words: 285
    Class/Type: Story/Society
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    Description:
       I have had a recent change in scenery, lifestyle, and life in general. This is to describe the definition of change I have had.


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    dotsA new song, a new lifedots
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    In times of norm, I would yield to the passing of time. I think nothing of the trouble I have set before myself.

    I whisk away the dangerous winding path that I set before myself. Many days I sat pondering about my future and what would be my destination.

    My paths crossed a struggle for life, sanity and all else that I have been and would be hung in the balance of the new life that I have claimed.

    Times have changed, so I see. As I noticed, so have I. Many things that I look back on, I realize the folly of my meaningless standards that I have set for myself not so long ago, yet seeming like forever.

    One year has past one lifetime ago, and I see myself in a different future now. No longer do I wonder about my future, I seize it. No longer do I yield to uncertainty, I wedge into it and follow the path lain before me.

    I now realize that the simple life I lived was dangerous and hazardous to the life that I truly wanted... Now I truly wonder: Was it worth putting off? Did I truly enjoy "living it up?" Or was I lying to myself.

    I laid my dream to bare and realized that it was only half of what I wanted. Do I really know what what I want anymore? Will I ever know?

    All I have left is the broken path tat I made for myself in the past. I now have to re-create my future in the present, for the past I chose cannot be my future... or it will fail.




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