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    dots Submission Name: Fly 2 Freedomdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 700
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    dotsFly 2 Freedomdots

    Spirit not contained
    by walls nor
    Love uplifting
    beyond heart to
    Fly free
    rescue me
    Soul not affected
    by fear nor
    God dries tears
    of pain and
    Fly free
    rescue me!

    Submitted on 2004-07-20 13:50:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great way of living life. I feel the same - you put it in words. - Jim
    | Posted on 2011-10-01 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it, good job. I related to it and it was awsome.
    The words just dragged me into it, such an emotional state. It's awsome..keep writing
    | Posted on 2004-10-11 00:00:00 | by Broken_Bruised | [ Reply to This ]
      I absolutely love it! God is just so Awsome and your poem is quite correct! Wow! I just can't brag on God enough and I get the impression that you are a christian! Great! Awsome poem! I love it!
    | Posted on 2004-08-16 00:00:00 | by Raineyes | [ Reply to This ]
      This was a very nice one! i agree it was short also and probably could have put a little more but thats ok. but this made me feel good after reading it!nice!
    | Posted on 2004-07-20 00:00:00 | by Day DreaMeR | [ Reply to This ]
      i needed to read something like this after the horrendous weekend i had. thanks! "God dries tears/of pain and/sadness/Fly free/rescue me!" yes yes yes!
    | Posted on 2004-07-20 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]

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