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    dots Submission Name: You Departeddots
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    Author: TJGirl
    ASL Info:    18/F/NE
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 2/3/7
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 30
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 812



    Description:
       Basically this poem is about a girl who loved a guy, but even though they were together, he still loved his ex, and she did not want to accept that fact, because she was scared to loose him, but then comes the day he just decides to leave and return to his ex.


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    You Departed...

    Silent as the moon
    You departed that afternoon
    With a fake smile in your mouth
    You turned and walked out
    I don’t know why I was blinded by that sight
    For I had no idea it would be our last night
    We went through so much, through good and bad times
    I remember when you use to hug me so tight
    And when you promised nothing would ever tear us apart
    But now comes the day that you take my heart
    Now that you are gone I miss you a lot
    A fight that was lost, without being fought
    I know you love her, trust me I can tell
    For some reason I knew, but to react I failed
    I knew it was to come, but I was scared to see
    That in reality you love her
    More than you ever loved me…




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