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    dots Submission Name: In my picturedots
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    Author: Demon__666
    ASL Info:    20/f/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 312/359/124
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsIn my picturedots
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    In my picture,
    There is no skin color.

    In my picture,
    There is no discrimination.

    In my picture,
    There is no hatred or war.

    In my picture,
    Love is genderless.

    In my picture,
    God has no thought or place.

    In my picture,
    Peace is key.

    In my picture,
    Everyone has a you and me.

    In my picture,
    You will never see,

    Because the things in my picture I know can never be.




    Submitted on 2009-09-29 15:26:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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