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    dots Submission Name: Love Gamedots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    18/F/Edmonton,AB, Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 142/116/83
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 22
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsLove Gamedots
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    You take advantage
    Of my strength
    You hold up
    My precious time
    Alotting it aside
    I wish you could see
    That your killing me.
    Deep down inside

    Should I wear a disugse
    To get allitle me time
    I just want something divine
    No dinner and wine
    Just you and me in the breeze,
    Falling to our knee's
    Come on Baby,
    Im only pleeding with you
    So come, come, come and a tickle, taunt and tease

    Is this a game of
    Cat and Mouse
    Hide and seek
    I promise I wont stop
    Im only here to please
    Dying to see you in extasy
    You don't gotta hide
    Dont close your eye's
    Just relax.... Come on now Breathe.




    Submitted on 2009-09-29 16:28:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like the rhythm of this piece. I also love your phrasing. This is a very relatable and original write, and i loved every syllable of it. Good write, Keep it up. Drop by and comment some of my work sometime.
    Jeff
    | Posted on 2009-10-01 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]



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