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    dots Submission Name: Mistaken...dots
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    Author: TJGirl
    ASL Info:    18/F/NE
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 2/3/7
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
    Total Views: 51
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 804



    Description:
       Basically this is like a story poem. A guy who was screwed over by his ex, has this wonderful best friend which happens to be a girl that is madly in love with him. In the course of time, this girl heals him, and helps him, but she never confesses that she is in love with him. The guy's ex comes back and he goes back with his ex, while his best friend feels like crap, because she just helped him and he just goes back, so she becomes addicted to drugs, and tobacco, and eventually dies. He on the other hand gets screwed over once again, and now he is alone with no one by his side.


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    dotsMistaken...dots
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    He was heartbroken
    She was his friend
    With him she was in love
    But never told him, not even in her end
    She healed his wounds
    Using her love as the cure
    But he was confused
    He knew this girl had sealed the scar
    But the girl who had once shattered his heart
    Had returned, and again she took his love
    Confused and mistaken he returned to her arms
    His friend had fought winds
    He had everything to win
    But this girl took him back
    Her heart had turned black
    His friend felt worthless
    So she turned to a mess,
    With drugs and tobacco
    Her life she destroyed.
    And this boy who she knew
    And had helped to survive
    Was now shattered again, and with no one by his side...




    Submitted on 2009-09-29 18:30:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I know what's that like. I had this crush on my best friend. It always hurt me when his heart would get broken by someone and he would go back for more. but I always wonder if I told him the truth that maybe he would of been with me.
    I'm glad you are dating someone who also has breath-taken sky blue eyes. I can't stop looking into my bf's.
    -Rachi:)
    | Posted on 2009-10-22 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]



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