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    dots Submission Name: Accpectance dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 680
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    I long to be accepted,
    I want to be wanted,
    is this asking too much?

    take me as I am,
    for I am not perfect,
    And maybe you need a reminder from time to time
    you are not perfect either!

    You all think you know me,
    you tell me "don't allow them to have the satisfaction of you quieting",
    Yet you are not looking through my eyes!
    You don't see the way they act,
    the nasty things they say!!

    I take what I can, for I need to...
    I need this JOB!
    I need the income!

    But No amount of money will make me just sit back and be their welcome mat!!

    I wish you all the best of luck but it is my time to
    Leave
    Go
    Find something better!!!!




    Submitted on 2009-09-29 20:54:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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