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    dots Submission Name: I Thought You Were Differentdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Fanfic/Depressed
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    dotsI Thought You Were Differentdots
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    I'm lost!
    You are like all the others...

    WHY??

    I thought you were different!
    You are my Father,
    you are my BLOOD!
    Within my pumping veins is your DNA

    You are not my step-father,
    yet your actions! they mock his!!
    Why is this?

    Why have you put this on my shoulders?
    Why are you just like them?

    You are not my uncle,
    yet your actions mock his!
    Why is this?

    My mindset is back to my childhood!
    I am to go to work with a painted smile!
    I am to get up with no worries, yet secretly they are there!

    I feel like I am 12 again confused, alone, and hurt...
    Not sure what to do...
    Just as if you were my uncle or worse...

    My Step Father!!!




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      Wow. This piece is really "in your face" and powerful. I don't know if I can completely relate to what is happening, but I know that I was drawn into wondering. Wonderful and heartfelt. I especially loved how you kept with the "you mock his" line. Genius! Keep up the good work. Drop by and comment some of my work sometime.
    Jeff
    | Posted on 2009-10-01 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]


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