Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Liberated Memoriesdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Lil J
    ASL Info:    22/F
    Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 40/29/38
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
    Total Views: 33
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 848



    Description:
       fuck. him again.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsLiberated Memoriesdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Sitting up late at night, freezing to the core
    I’m trying in vain to explain myself to you
    Oblivious words, as cold as your heart
    Hurting me so much, even if they are true

    I get so confused, believing you understand
    But what soon follows completely mystifies me
    We’ve shared so much, both of our souls revealed
    Confessions whispered in the dark clandestinely

    Silently I have sat by, scrutinizing your pain
    Even if my words are silenced, I cry out for you
    Because if you won’t stand on your own
    What good will my hopeless attempts do?

    So know this, and know it to be real and true
    Once you find yourself, what you’ve been living for
    Remember me, and all that we’ve been through
    And know I’m not going to be there anymore




    Submitted on 2009-09-30 00:25:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I really relate and empathize with this piece. We all have that someone who we are no longer with, and understand their tribulations. But we feel slighted that they are leaving us when they need us the most, and needed to be reminded of this fact. You have expressed this idea well, and thoroughly. A magnificent write. Keep up the good work. Drop by and comment some of my work sometime.
    Jeff
    | Posted on 2009-10-01 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.