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    dots Submission Name: Someonedots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Spoof/Longing
    Total Views: 483
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    dotsSomeonedots
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    I long to become someone you never expected of me!
    To be able to imagine to your facial expressions,
    or the talk among everyone!

    To be able to leave this world as "someone" rather than a "no one"
    Is my ultimate goal!
    My ultimate conquest!

    I say my goodbyes now,
    only with the hopes that something better lies within my grasp!
    I leave with this hope,
    that with each step I take whether planned or not,
    its all with faith that one day I find my place!!

    I end up happy...
    I end up being "someone"!!!




    Submitted on 2009-09-30 00:26:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      And you will pretty lady! Plan your work and work your plan! Being successful starts with the desire to be successful. From the way you have been working, I would say you are already on your way!

    Here's wishing you every success!
    | Posted on 2009-10-01 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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