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    dots Submission Name: Prince of Squeaksdots

    Author: Max Million
    ASL Info:    21/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 36/64/78
    Words: 177
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsPrince of Squeaksdots

    Sitting on my throne of thorns
    I toy with your emotions
    I am your God, man of worms
    Allow me to introduce myself

    I am the Prince of Squeaks
    Lord of the Insane
    God of Madness

    Laugh you may
    No difference to me
    When the tower falls, and Rhye subsides
    You shall no longer be free

    Curse the blessed altar boy
    His favorite, his weak knight
    One day, this bastard son
    Will show the world whatís right

    I am the Prince of Squeaks
    Lord of the Insane
    God of Madness

    Of course you want some
    Why would you not
    Iím one hell of a guy
    But be wary my dear, this world is rotÖ
    With danger and greed
    And corruption and doom
    Quite pleasant, donít you agree

    I am the Prince of Squeaks
    Lord of the Insane
    God of Madness

    Now we come to a fitting close
    The curtain is pulled up
    My actors disperse and you clap, but my dear
    The show must go on

    Submitted on 2009-09-30 10:14:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Agreed, it brings a 'Lord of the Flies' flash back but also a Mad hatter. I know, un original though but what can one say! I though it was well written, definitely fun to read!! For some reason I get the picture of a tiny boy sitting on a tricked out throne and ordering people to go commit suicide >_> But that's just my tiny perspective of this . .
    | Posted on 2010-02-26 00:00:00 | by Alexandrine | [ Reply to This ]
      Woah, this brings back a lot of memories from 'Lord of the Flies' the book. I like how you describe that evil. Interesting concept too. I really like it.
    | Posted on 2009-10-01 00:00:00 | by Peacejoe | [ Reply to This ]

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