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    dots Submission Name: Why am I alonedots

    Author: gothgirl101
    ASL Info:    18/F/Pelham,AL
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 10/41/17
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsWhy am I alonedots

    Why am I alone in the dark with no one to hold
    me securely?

    Is it because I just simply did something wrong?

    Well, we all make mistakes, you just feel like fucking
    the world and not worrying what people think of you!

    Why am I alone in the dark without my life in my
    hands and someone too tell me I’m wrong or right?

    Well it just so happens that the world has turned
    their back on you, and don’t care about you cause you’re nothing but a HYPOCRITE!

    So as you go off into your own world you realize you did nothing wrong so off you go!!

    Submitted on 2009-09-30 12:06:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      sometimes i feel that way, I'm actually going to create a poem called "Did I do something wrong?"
    | Posted on 2011-01-13 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi I could not help noticing all the zeros and decided to give you the benefit of the doubt.
    With me you wont see zeros because after `n month I delete them.
    The main thing with me is when I see the “F” word I don’t usually read any further because that word compromised my intelligence.
    In this case I will endure.
    The reason I find “Why someone is in the Dark” is because there is a shadow around you that you yourself created. You don’t have to do anything wrong to be ignored or something right to be noticed. All you have to do is be yourself all the time and attention will come your way. I came your way through this comms because I experience a beautiful person and wish that I could be near you. But as that will not transpire, I can still “see” through your disguise. Evaporate that shadow - bring your true self into the Light and “WOW” what have we here!
    Luv u Joachim.

    | Posted on 2009-12-08 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]

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