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    dots Submission Name: Hiding from the light!dots
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    Author: gothgirl101
    ASL Info:    18/F/Pelham,AL
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 10/41/17
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Story/Passion
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    dotsHiding from the light!dots
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    You're hiding behind a thick wall...

    Not knowing who you are or what you're doing...

    When you look down you think...Why in the hell did this happen to me...why not anyone else....

    But you think again and as you look down a tear falls on your scar you put there your own self....

    When you look up you call on HIM and he doesn't listen....

    Then you finally realize what you've done to yourself....





    Submitted on 2009-09-30 12:07:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Merry Meet.
    Thanks for the look-in is appreciated..

    “Hiding...” seems to relate to people who will make it their own expriences. I believe.
    Hiding behind a wall must be as self-built unit, a DIY type of thing.
    Well it happened because you made it happen. You are so right about tearing the wall down – He is listening and maybe you dont hear Him from under the pile of brick still covering you.
    Yep you are sooooo right – we do it all to ourself through ourselfs.
    Clear away the pile of bricks and listen again – He is there and here and everywhere – always - I know.. Blessed Be. joachim
    | Posted on 2009-10-26 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]


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